Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Making a Cheryl Klein Book Map

I'm attending Scholastic editor Cheryl Klein's Master Class this coming Saturday, so this week I'm doing homework (I secretly love homework). We have to make a map of our book. I spent too much time yesterday trying to make a chart using Word--but I couldn't get the little boxes big enough, yet small enough with margins large enough, and I know that some scenes are much shorter than others--I needed flexibility. So I went to the office supply store (I secretly love office supply stores) and bought legal sized paper and pens in fun colors.

Here's my blank map:



The categories are: scene#, pages, total number of pages (I combined these into one little box); when the scene occurs; the setting; characters (I assigned my main characters colors and listed them by name); what do they want in this scene; the action in the scene; change that occurs in the scene; revision notes.

I'm going to box my map after I write what is needed for each scene so I won't have to cramp complex scenes or take up too much space for short scenes.

Here are the first five scenes all mapped out:


Here's what I've done so far--it's one long document. Now I just have to finish writing those final few chapters. I'm SO close, but probably won't quite finish the whole manuscript by Saturday.

As the sticky notes indicate, I've already targeted several parts of my story to strengthen during revision.   I also realized that I suffered a bit of Middle Fatigue, writing too-short, underdeveloped chapters in the middle of the book. Time to lengthen those too!

Can't wait for the workshop. I've already learned a lot doing the homework.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks for sharing this, Sydney! I just got "Second Sight" in the mail yesterday, and I was up late reading it. Can't wait to hear how the master class goes!

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    1. I'm already glad that I had the opportunity to force myself to make the map. Lots to revise! But now it doesn't feel so daunting. Hope you enjoy Second Sight :)

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